Tuesday, January 29, 2008

Boredom Part 3


This is a conitnued work in progress update. Does the end table's perspective (like is there too much top showing?)

2 comments:

DharmaTurtle said...

yeah, perspective is a bit meh. The armchair and the tabletop are about the same height, yet how much of the armrest's top can you see? As compared to the table. Also, if the shadow on the chair is any indication, the other shadows need to be harder and more defined.

Anonymous said...

the white highlight on the floor has been bothering me throughout, the blob shape to it just seems wrong to me, and unconvincing..

and the table is a biittt off in perspective, it may be less of a chore to shoot it straight on, just as the chair was.

also, what's this random jumble of shapes above the bear on the back of the chair? if it has a point, i'm not seeing it, rather it's a distraction.