Hm, the top pic is posted again, so I'll comment up there. I've already blabbed about the next to pics... eh. One thing each I'll nit about.
For the second picture, their right hands (our left) are kinda awkward. Maybe if they were a bit further across her waist, it would flow, but like this it seems kinda forced. I have no idea how your photoshoots go, but if I were you I'd literally just sit there for maybe 5-10 seconds, just looking through the viewfinder and asking them to just freeze. Kinda like in the old days, when the film had to be exposed for a few minutes/hours. That way you can see anything that might need slight adjustment, like that hand thing.
Third picture, her skin seems a bit overexposed. It might work as a magazine-esque styled picture, but the shadows are kinda turning her smile funny in the blown up pic. Nice pose, and very nice fixup on the background.
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Hm, the top pic is posted again, so I'll comment up there. I've already blabbed about the next to pics... eh. One thing each I'll nit about.
For the second picture, their right hands (our left) are kinda awkward. Maybe if they were a bit further across her waist, it would flow, but like this it seems kinda forced. I have no idea how your photoshoots go, but if I were you I'd literally just sit there for maybe 5-10 seconds, just looking through the viewfinder and asking them to just freeze. Kinda like in the old days, when the film had to be exposed for a few minutes/hours. That way you can see anything that might need slight adjustment, like that hand thing.
Third picture, her skin seems a bit overexposed. It might work as a magazine-esque styled picture, but the shadows are kinda turning her smile funny in the blown up pic. Nice pose, and very nice fixup on the background.
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